Wednesday, October 14, 2009

Childrens book text

It was a perfectly normal day when Ms. Joiner’s class came to school.
They came in, sat down and read books while they waited quietly for their teacher.
Ms. Joiner came in smiling and carrying a rolled-up rug under her arm.
"Hey what's that?" asked the children.
"It's a surprise for all of you!" said Ms. Joiner.
And she placed the rug in the corner of the room.
The students kept looking at the rug and wondering what it could be for.
Finally, Ms. Joiner took the rug and spread it on the floor.
"Come sit in a circle please." she called the children.
They all came running and sat in a circle, just as requested.
"Class, we are going on a field trip today! To all of your favorite places!"
“But how will we get there?” The students wondered.
"On this magic carpet," replied Ms. Joiner.
She sat down with them, and the carpet flew up and away.
And they went to all of the children's favorite places:
Andrew and Isaiah wanted to go to Disney World.
Orion chose Leaping Lizards.
Audrey waned to go to the Humane Society to look at animals.
Richard and Claire said “We want to go to Target, please!”
They stopped at Lindsey’s lake house so she could show them around.
Then Jack C., Kelsey, and Caroline requested to go to the beach.
Cole wanted to go to Toy’s R Us to shop.
Yahiko, Sanaya, and Mary all said “The Mall!”
Malik took them to Chuckee Cheese’s where they played for almost an hour.
Ella’s request was farthest: all the way to Mexico.
Annie loved Stone Mountain and they climbed all the way to the top,
Jack L. asked to go to the park.
Isaac said the playground and the magic carpet took them.
The children were very tired by now.
So Ms. Joiner returned them to school where they arrived just as it was time to go home.
The children made sure to thank their teacher for the wonderful day.
They went home to tell their parents about all their adventures.

1 comment:

  1. Need: Grammar check (more then one)
    Illustration ideas
    Title ieas

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